去旅游日语作文初级英语

Japan Trip

Japan was a lot of fun. It was very cool and windy. We flew kites in the park. I bought a watch there. I wanted to buy more, but I didn't have enough money. The gardens in Japan were beautiful. I really liked them. The department stores were huge! I couldn't find my mom in them. The food was delicious. We ate a lot of fish, and I also liked the vegetables and the cakes. I hope I can go to Japan again someday.

建议

1. 在写作时,注意使用简单的句子结构,避免复杂的从句。

2. 使用一些描述性的词汇来描述你的感受和经历,例如 "cool"、"windy"、"beautiful" 等。

3. 尝试使用一些过去时态的句子,描述你在日本的具体活动和经历。

4. 在结尾部分,可以表达你对再次访问日本的期望或感受。