雅思11test4task1写作

雅思11test4task1写作

在雅思写作Task 1中，考生需要根据所提供的图表、图形或表格，总结并描述数据的主要特征和趋势。下面是根据剑桥雅思11 Test 4 Task 1的写作要求，整理出的一个简洁明了的范例：

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题目：

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

写作结构：

引言 ：简要介绍图表的主题和内容。

主体段落

翻新前数据：

描述翻新前游客的数量和满意度调查结果。

翻新后数据：描述翻新后游客的数量和满意度调查结果。

对比分析：对比翻新前后的数据，指出变化趋势。

结尾：

总结数据变化的意义，可以提及这些变化对博物馆的意义。

写作示例：

The table illustrates the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after refurbishment, alongside the results of a satisfaction survey conducted during the same periods. Before the refurbishment, the museum received [X] visitors, with [percentage]% of visitors feeling satisfied and [percentage]% feeling very satisfied. In contrast, after the refurbishment, the number of visitors increased to [X], with a notable rise in satisfaction levels to [percentage]% satisfied and [percentage]% very satisfied. Notably, the number of dissatisfied visitors dropped from [percentage]% to [percentage]%. No response rates remained constant at [percentage]%. These figures suggest a successful refurbishment that has likely enhanced the visitor experience.

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请根据上述结构，结合自己的知识和观点，撰写一篇完整的文章。记得在写作时注意时态的正确使用，保持语言流畅，逻辑清晰。