美国大学essay开头

美国大学申请Essay的开头非常重要，因为它能够立即吸引读者的注意力并传达文章的主题。以下是一些有效的开头策略：

动作型开头

描述一个具体的动作或事件，如：“I carried the puck up the left wing and couldn’t find a team-mate as I reached the offensive zone.”

领导型开头

突出领导能力，如：“During the summer before my senior year, I founded and managed a company that employed five people and grossed twenty thousand dollars.”

标准型开头

包含人物、事件、时间、地点、原因和形式等要素，如：“While I have had many opportunities to serve in the capacity of a leader in both my personal and professional lives, there are two occasions that I feel clearly demonstrate my managerial potential.”

惊奇型开头

引起读者的好奇心，如：“There are two individuals who have deeply shaped my professional thinking.”

显示独特性

强调自己的与众不同之处，如：“I’m so bad at this,” she said, preparing baby bottles. “But ma, I chose Tech because I wanted to be challenged.”

悬念型开头

设置悬念，激发读者的兴趣，如：“I have not been eating properly for a long time…”